Honestly delayed talking about this because I wasnt sure how to feel (though I did enjoy it).
I didnt really mind the self aware dialogue in the episode, but I was really thrown off by the fact that the episode was more interested in telling an emotional story about a love triangle than actually being scary, and that different expectation made watching it weird, even if what they did was fine, and it was nice to see the alternate future.
Its a weird conclusion to make, but I almost feel like this is a really good episode if you really just look at the It parody as just the backdrop for this AU story and not something to really focus on, but that sounds like a failure of a ToH if you're supposed to look at it that way. Taking everything into account you end up focusing on the fact that it's not an execution you'd expect. That being said Im still giving it a 4/5 because I really cant call this episode bad, just not what I'd have wanted.
Moe interrupting the cutaway definitely took me out of it, and while I did find a lot of the other obvious stuff like pause for tention and "I like this for some reason" less annoying but still noticable, I get the feeling that the writers probably thought that since it was a less serious story than Pixelated and Afraid or Serious Flanders, they were more willing to lean on genre conventions and be a bit less rigid in how grounded it should be. I wouldnt necessarily call it a bad thing, though it is a choice that I'd say I understand people thinking hurt the episode, like giving Boyz in the Highlandz a B-plot. It's easier to add self aware comedy to a horror story and make it work but there arent many places to add that to prestige TV.I think you’ve touched on my biggest issue with the episode, John. Quite unlike A Serious Flanders or Pixelated and Afraid, Not It has much clunkier dialogue that draws far too much attention to itself. The characters talk in ways that aren’t naturalistic and it pulls me out of the story. Mike Amato astutely describes it as the characters ‘play-acting’ which undermines the reality and gravity of the story. It’s surprising if only because the show has been veering away from this kind of dialogue writing in the last few years (to its immense benefit).
I didnt really mind the self aware dialogue in the episode, but I was really thrown off by the fact that the episode was more interested in telling an emotional story about a love triangle than actually being scary, and that different expectation made watching it weird, even if what they did was fine, and it was nice to see the alternate future.
Its a weird conclusion to make, but I almost feel like this is a really good episode if you really just look at the It parody as just the backdrop for this AU story and not something to really focus on, but that sounds like a failure of a ToH if you're supposed to look at it that way. Taking everything into account you end up focusing on the fact that it's not an execution you'd expect. That being said Im still giving it a 4/5 because I really cant call this episode bad, just not what I'd have wanted.